One of the columns is labelled Cohesion & Coherence. This is one of the ways the writing is assessed: is the composition cohesive, is the composition coherent? (Cohesion is the noun, cohesive is the adjective; coherence is the noun, coherent is the adjective.) This is the focus on this post.
What is Cohesion & Coherence?
Cohesion and coherence aren't too difficult to explain. Cohesion refers to connectivity in a text. Coherence refers to how easy it is to understand the writing.
Cohesion & Coherence
"My favourite colour is blue. I like it because it is calming and it relaxes me. I often go outside in the summer and lie on the grass and look into the clear sky when I am stressed. For this reason, I'd have to say my favourite colour is blue."
|Cohesive AND coherent: Blue > Relaxes > Clear Sky > Blue (Photos from Flickr)|
This sentence is both coherent and cohesive, but let's focus on the cohesion first. I've highlighted the ways that each sentence is connected to the sentence before.
Cohesion with NO Coherence
Now, here is a sentence that has cohesion but is not coherent.
"My favourite colour is blue. Blue sports cars go very fast. Driving in this way is dangerous and can cause many car crashes. I had a car accident once and broke my leg. I was very sad because I had to miss a holiday in Europe because of the injury."
As you can see, there is plenty of cohesion here. The sentences connect clearly together but if you read the paragraph, it really makes no sense - I start talking about blue and I finish talking about a holiday in Europe. There is no coherence in this sentence.
Coherence with NO Cohesion
Now, let's take a look at a sentence that is coherent but not cohesive.
"My favourite colour is blue. I'm calm and relaxed. In the summer I lie on the grass and look up."
|Coherent NOT cohesive: Blue - Calm & Relaxed - Looking Up (Photos from Flickr)|
This is more difficult to understand but basically this lack of cohesion means a lack of sufficient connectors to join the ideas together. If I try hard I can understand what the person is saying: a short answer, an explanation, an example; however the sentences don't fit together.
Cohesion & Coherence in Conversation
|Are your conversations coherent? Are they cohesive?|
A. "I think these people are having a good time."
B. "It appears these people are enjoying themselves."
A. "They seem to be on holiday."
B. "It looks like they are on vacation."
Obviously there is no connection between A and B in this conversation. We understand them and they are coherent. What is missing is cohesion. They are not connected. A is not listening to B and B is not listening to A.
On the other hand, take a look at this example:
A. "I think these people are having a good time."
B. "Time is difficult to manage. I am always late for my social appointments like when I have a date with a girl."
A. "I like girls with long, dark hair and brown eyes."
B. "My dog has brown eyes and a long tail."
This example shows that there is cohesion but the conversation makes no sense and therefore it is missing coherence.
Next time you are looking at a piece of writing; a newspaper, an essay you wrote, another student's essay, a web article like this one, you should consider the cohesion and coherence of the composition. It is worth 25% of your IELTS mark and it is an important factor in the other Cambridge exams as well.
Hope this helps you. Comments are welcome.
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Coherence & Cohesion
Coherence and cohesion are essential for aiding readability and idea communication. Coherence is about the unity of the ideas and cohesion the unity of structural elements. One way to do this is through the use of cohesive devices: logical bridges (repetition), verbal bridges (synonyms), linking words, and clear back referencing. If these types of devices are missing in the text, it not only becomes more difficult to read the text, but also to understand its contents since the reader must guess how the various parts of the paragraph or text are connected, which will involve re-reading sentences or larger sections more than once.
With logical bridges, the same idea of a topic is carried over (repeated) from sentence to sentence, and successive sentences can be constructed in parallel form. With verbal bridges, key words or synonymous words can be repeated, pronouns can replace nouns and transition words (as shown below) can be used. In the paragraph below, words and phrases that serve to increase the coherence of the paragraph are highlight and underlined. As this sample paragraph indicates, coherence and cohesion in a paragraph is established by combining more than one device.
There are three components to a typical modern catalytic converter: one to effect the reduction of nitrogen oxides, another to facilitate the oxidation of carbon monoxide and hydrocarbons, and the third to maintain the correct abundance of oxygen. In the first stage the nitrogen oxides are reduced using a platinum catalyst, which facilitates their decomposition into nitrogen and oxygen. In the next stage the carbon fragments are oxidized over a platinum/rhodium catalyst. Finally, the correct amount of oxygen is ensured by monitoring the amount of oxygen passing into the engine, and by incorporating into the catalyst a metal oxide that absorbs oxygen (by reacting with it to form a higher oxide) when the fuel mixture has too much oxygen and reverts to the lower oxide, releasing oxygen, when the mixture has too little (Atkins. P.W, 1991)
The topic sentence introduces the three stages which are then explained in more detail.
The second sentence includes a key word “reduced”, linking the idea to the previous sentence though in a different form from earlier (“reduction”). A similar repetition occurs in the third sentence.
The processes of the first two stages are described in parallel form.The final sentence sums up this process, clearly signalled by “finally”.
A more direct way of emphasizing the inherent logic of a paragraph is through the use of linking words and phrases which mark transitions within and between sentences. The table below gives a sample of such linking words and groups them based on the connection they illustrate/indicate
|Attitude||Contrast / Comparison|
In other words,
as a result,
for this reason,
owing to this,
on the contrary,
on the one hand, . . . on the other hand,
|Time ||Summary||Order||Back reference|
later,in the end,
in short,to sum up,
first(ly), second(ly), third(ly),
Back referencing is another effective device for creating coherence, but this device must be used carefully because it can cause confusion rather than create clarity. Consider whether or not the use of back referencing is clear in the following example
|Plagiarism is a recurrent problem, which is considered an important matter in university education. Chalmers is no exception to that and therefore has a strict policy regarding how it should be dealt with.|
The back references are vague and bring up questions such as what does ’that’ refer to?
Be more specific:
that could be "this situation"it could be "the issue of plagiarism"
It is perfectly acceptable to use back referencing, just be sure to make it clear. One way to do this, as exemplified in the remarks above, is to add a summary word to the back reference (e.g. this situation, where situation is the summary word). Using a summary word specifies the back reference, often making it much clearer.
Connect ideas, sentences and paragraphs using a variety of cohesive devices:
• logical bridges (parallel construction)
- carry the same idea of a topic over from sentence to sentence, i.e. successive sentences are constructed in parallel form
e.g. In the first stage, an idea can be generated by using a mind-map and some discussion. In the next stage, a clear plan of action can be produced in the form of a list.
• verbal bridges (back referencing/linking words)
- key words/phrases might be repeated in a number of sentences, or synonyms utilised instead to avoid exact repetition.
e.g. There are three stages to the pre-writing process: one to effect the generation of ideas, another to facilitate an action plan, and the third to research the information to be included in your text. In the first stage, an idea can be generated by using a mind-map and some discussion.
- words/phrases to link ideas between sentences for smooth transition
e.g. writing is a process, which can take a long time and involve many obstacles. However, when you are finished, you’ll see that it was worth the effort.